I would say just one thing for the first design (just think about the message), in the design you say “Smile” and there is a woman with a pistol near her mouth. What kind of message are you trying to say with this design ?
The first one is interesting and intentionally bizarre, but it appears to be art rather than graphic design.
I had trouble reading the word Berry on the second one. Legibility is very important in branding
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Ok thank you, yes I’m more of an artist going towards graphic design so that make sense!!
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Very good !, but just remember when you make a Graphic Design of anything then you always wants to give a message of a product or some thing related.
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