LOGO DESIGN critique

Hello dear Graphic Design Forum members, an organization approached me recently to create an alternative Logo design for their brand style guide so how fits to design guidelines of that vendor. Some back and forth correspondence later I came up with that artifact and require your opinion to go forth with next steps. To satisfy the brief curiosity and engagement of viewers is required. The company targets multiple target audiences and requires also, which is a follow-up project coming up, creative guidance regarding a brand awareness campaign.