Logo Design

The Crit Pit
#1

Hello everyone,

Here’s a logo that I did for my clients adult health care business. I would appreciate your comments about it. Thanks!

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#2

Link is broken?

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#3

Post Updated!

#4

First impressions. The colours are typical, the general clean aesthetic works.

The is unusual and looks like a race track. I find the tiny wedge of grey at the top where the S and F join a bit awkward though. It’s so small, doesn’t really warrant being a 3 colour logo. I think the grey wedge needs to be larger or turned into a white line to match the rest.

I like the sans serif font. It has a lot of personality while still being very geometric and clean. The round corners of the A and M work well with the mark.

The script font doesn’t match the rest of the design. Looks like it is added as an afterthought and doesn’t feel very balanced. I would be inclined to use the same font throughout.

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#5

WOW!! Thanks for being critic…

Actually the grey wedge is the shadow of blue over green … If you can see it again… :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

I will have to rethink of the font… I just checked it again and it seems unbalanced, Thanks for suggesting.

I am impressed. :+1:

#6

Happy to be of service :slight_smile:

If it is a shadow, I would consider adding a shadow to the middle portion as well.

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#7

Yeah You are right… Let me try that too. .Thanks for suggesting.

#8

I like your concept, and how you’ve manged to create the heart symbol with manipulating the letters. Nicely done.
However, I think the top-heaviness of the logo is making the whole thing a little wobbly and imbalanced.
I realise that not all designs need to be balanced, but this doesn’t seem to be working here.

#9

Thanks. .I will consider your suggestion.

#10

I see a heart… It sort of reminds me of a stethescope…

Is the green portion of the illustration to be the S and the blue part a flipped part of the f for famiglia?

is cagliari also part of the logo design?

#11

Keep in mind that it’s possible that this logo may need to be used in one color applications (embroidery, etched on glass, etc.) - will it work then?

#12

You read it right… Exactly the things are as you have stated :laughing:.

#13

Yes. It will work… Definitely.

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