Very mature. You came here for help. How can we help you if you don’t listen?
I explained to you already why the video doesn’t work for critique.
Here’s my honest opinion of the logo - brace yourself it’s gonna hurt.
It’s crap, it doesn’t work - as others have said it’s partially illegible. So on that note - scrap it and start again.
AND for all the reasons I mentioned earlier - SEE my earlier post which was very helpful and I have worked in this industry for 25 years. I see mistakes like yours every single day.
You seem to have skipped over the parts of critique that will actually help you - instead you focus on the critique of the shitty animation job you did.
Even still, you dismiss this critique then claim that you’ll make all your logo animations just to annoy me? What is that?
Take the critique - the animations do not work for this audience. Listen!
Yes, your animation is not good.
An honest critique of the animation - it’s boring, tired, runs too fast, can’t read any of what it says, it’s a struggle, painful and unnecessary for the audience you intended it for, which is this community.
And you weren’t looking for critique on the animation - just the logo - so why even bother with an animation… it is pointless.
If you think coming to a forum is going to get you glowing reviews and pats on the back - think again - you’re posting them because you want to improve. Or else you wouldn’t post at all.
If you want to improve - then listen.
Or don’t, it’s your choice.