Tell me everything that’s wrong with this

I’m firmly opposed to the logotype included here. The image you see is the logo as it will be used in all instances—including the blue background and white lettering.

Beyond the design help me articulate why the logo doesn’t work.

I really appreciate your help with this.

The forum rules allow only the original designer to post their work for critique. Your opposition to the use of the logo you posted suggests you are not the designer. Please clarify.


As @HotButton mentioned, please tell us whether or not you’re the creator.