With no background information about the company, it’s tough to offer a meaningful critique. Who is this for? What does the company do? Who is their target market? Who are competitors? What is this company’s strategic advantage over their competitors?
Aside from that, we can only judge on aesthetics. To that end, I’d say the relationship of the size of the type to the mark is off, the relationship of the blue type to the orange type is off, the alignment of the mark element are off, and you need to learn how to kern type.