Vertical or Horizontal Business Card? Opinions?

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#21

The latest is good. Only slight issue is the size of the text under the logo, for the business card you might want this a bit larger.

In doing that tighten up on the left slightly and adjust to the bottom margin.

Overall you’ve take the critique well.

Nothing wrong with having a back to the card.
Keep it if you want, but adds costs and print driver mentioned, it’s usually written on.

It’s completely up to you

I like the simple version.

As it’s all one color I suggest to define it as a spot colour with Pantone reference, if you haven’t already.

#22

Hi There, I am not going to give any comment, just an opinion (a suggestion). But what if you change AD to ADS ? (Amanda’s Design Studio) and I think sounds more personal. (Just a suggestion, I am not going to critique your logo or anything related).

#23

It’s like suggesting Nike change its name to Nickelodeon.

Who knows. They/she might like it.

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#24

Hi There, Eriskay !

Thanks for your reply, just really appreciated !. I like the comparison of Nike and Nickelodeon ! Sounds great to make a saying when comparing stuff in the wrong way (as I did).

Thanks so much for your reply !

#25

A huge improvement. Well done. I still have some little niggles with it (mostly type sizes and spacing), but overall much cleaner and going to do the job you want it to more effectively, I’d say.

It may not be my aesthetic, but it is definitely not ‘ugly’. What kind of tutor uses that sort of language anyway. They definitely won’t get the best from their students by tearing them down like that.

Don’t let it get you down. Keep at it.

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