Am kinda with @sprout - if I were doing what you’re doing I would simply pick out a beautiful typeface that’s classic and timeless and roll with that and stop trying to over do it.
Have you asked yourself what is it you’re trying to achieve with your logo - who are trying to talk to and what do you want it to say?
Firstly it needs to be legibile. Legibilty is king
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Your current typeface looks like it would be great in a sci-fi movie about spaceships and star wars, but it’s hard to read. This is huge issue when your first and foremost job as a designer is to be a master at visual communication.
Secondly you need to think about the type of work you’re going to be producing and the types of clients you want to attract and I would select your typeface based upon that.
Also your business name is very long, you may want to consider shortening it (like droping your middle name or even the word “graphics”).
Regarding your mark - I would scrap it (sorry!). There is already a lot going on with just your name and you probably don’t need it.
I would have a look on behance or dribble at existing designers that are producing designs in the space that you’d like to work and emulate them.
Clients don’t choose a designer based up on how “original” or “unique” their designs are, they choose the least risky option. And when you present as quirky and off beat, all they see is risk.
Don’t try to be unique, just try to be good. 
Hope this helps, good luck with your business 