I am open to critique. We need each others feedback to develop skills and move through the art and design plane.
Is pepperoni spaghetti a salad ?? 
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Illegible.
No CTA.
Is the bar code supposed to be a “cute” logo. Or is it the Pineapple?
As my Graphic Arts professor used to say, “Do Over.”
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Pasta with pineapple? Check your combinations, just think about … cheese, pasta and other things. A logo is a pineapple ? just think about name “salad” and pineapple looks for more tropical things not with pasta and cheese.
@maxmustermann I think it would be helpful if you answered the following questions.
What is your level of education?
What is your level of experience?
What are we looking at (poster, banner ad, space ad, menu cover)?
How does your design meet the client’s need or solve the client’s problem?
I have no idea what this is or why it was created.